Thursday, October 4, 2018

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Suspect in Mollie Tibbetts’ killing enters not guilty plea
By: Ray Sanchez & Marlena Baldacci

“He later led authorities to a corn field, where they found a body covered in corn leaves. Tibbetts’
clothing was also found at the scene.”
When the news came out that the authorities had found Mollie Tibbetts’ body, people all
across the nation were shocked. The 20-year-old University of Iowa student had disappeared one
July evening after leaving her home to go on a jog. It would not be until months later in which authorities
would be led to a cornfield, where the body of a young woman laid, covered in corn leaves. The man
who lead them to the body was 24 year old Cristhian Bahena Rivera, the man suspected and later charged
for the kidnapping and murder Tibbets.
Bahena Rivera came to the U.S. illegally from Mexico when he was still a minor. When he turned 20,
he eventually found himself in Iowa, where he’d get a job as a worker at Yarrabee Farms, a dairy farm
not too far away from where Tibbetts lived. Bahena Rivera had admitted, when being questioned by authorities,
that he had followed her along a country road, and claimed to remember getting “mad” at her before
somehow, everything else that transpired was blocked from memory. The only thing Rivera
remembers after getting upset with Tibbetts is standing in front of her corn leaf covered body,
with no recollection of what happened in between those two moments. Rivera would later go on
to plead ‘not guilty’ at a court in Poweshiek County, Iowa.
While authorities have stated that Rivera has no previous criminal history, and while he claims to not
recall the events after getting angry with Tibbetts, it’s still very hard to believe Rivera didn’t abduct
and murder her. Regardless of whether it was his full intent to kill Tibbets, or if it was mental illness
that caused him to have diminished responsibility for the murder, there's a good chance that
Cristhian Bahena Rivera will be going to prison for a long time.


5 comments:

  1. Caleb, I can't read your post. Go back to edit the blog and fix the formatting error from the copy and paste. Then tell me when it's ready to grade!

    Interesting from what I can see so far!

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  2. I really like how you used a quote lead to start your response. The quote you used really drew me in and I wanted to keep reading. I like your work! Nice job.

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  3. This article does a pretty good job of flowing together, your view on the topic flows together nicely and adds an interesting view onto the situation.

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  4. I really liked your lead! Your flow was also very good. Good job!

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  5. Avoid passive voice (places where you say "would" or "had" where you don't really need it). In journalistic writing, you want to be concise with your working. The parts about the body and the corn feels a little overused. Maybe keep it for the most powerful part of the story. You do a nice job here of maintaining a neutral voice particularly in a story this brutal.

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