Caleb Syke
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Have you ever had a pet that to you, felt more like your own child rather than simply an animal you care
for? High school junior, Mackenzie Joseph, more commonly referred to as Mack Jo, seems to have that
relationship with her pet labradoodle, Gracie Rose. When she’s not busy biking or traveling, Mack Jo is
spending quality time with the dog she loves. “I’m the main person in my house who takes care of her.”
Says Mack Jo, “I feed her, clean up after her, cuddle with her and take her on walks. I give her a lot of
attention.”
for? High school junior, Mackenzie Joseph, more commonly referred to as Mack Jo, seems to have that
relationship with her pet labradoodle, Gracie Rose. When she’s not busy biking or traveling, Mack Jo is
spending quality time with the dog she loves. “I’m the main person in my house who takes care of her.”
Says Mack Jo, “I feed her, clean up after her, cuddle with her and take her on walks. I give her a lot of
attention.”
If Mack ever finds herself going on a vacation, she’s reluctant to leave her favorite pup behind. “I always
take a few pictures with her before I leave. If I’m ever missing her while I’m on the trip, I just pull up the
pictures on my phone and look at them. Also, my neighbor sends me photos of her since she’s the one
who dog-sits while we’re away.” When Mack gets home from a trip, greeting Gracie after not seeing her
for so long is her first priority.
take a few pictures with her before I leave. If I’m ever missing her while I’m on the trip, I just pull up the
pictures on my phone and look at them. Also, my neighbor sends me photos of her since she’s the one
who dog-sits while we’re away.” When Mack gets home from a trip, greeting Gracie after not seeing her
for so long is her first priority.
The bond that dogs and their owners share is unique. It’s a relationship built on love and loyalty. Mack
and Gracie’s relationship is no exception.
and Gracie’s relationship is no exception.
cute ending. this makes me want to be friends with her to find out more
ReplyDeleteI liked reading this, it's very interesting to see her companionship with the dog from another perspective!
ReplyDeleteI like this I feel as you did a really good job on this profile.
ReplyDeletethis was very cute! good quotes and details on why she loves her dog so much (:
ReplyDeleteI thought that this was well written, and thought the quotes were a nice touch.
ReplyDeleteI think that the quotes were in very good places and it was generally written very well.
ReplyDeletethis is so cute! i like how you wrote the story and the quotes you used.
ReplyDeleteYou did a really nice job of focusing on aspect of a person and zooming in on the (depth over breadth). Interesting syntax makes for a nice flow. I recommend using a different color font so your posts are easier to read.
ReplyDeleteIt's really interesting that you and MackJo focused on being animal parents. I just realized that!
ReplyDeleteSo cute! But I suggest you to use a different format because it was kind of hard for be to read. And also it runs of the page a bit... Great job!
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